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Chur bailey its hirini.i like your bullying post and i hope your not one of these bullies in the school. your poem is really expiring but you can maybe put something about your experience during or when you have been bullied. nice poem and keep up the great work.
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Sup bailey its kingi. I really Like your writing and how its around bullying and has lots of good language features. Maybe come check my work out https://kpskingih.blogspot.com/
kia ora bailey its nikau your mate. i really like how you are doing a bullying poem. chewed up and spat back out. there are good language fetchers in there. when you have time go and cheek out my blog and maybe even comment if you have time. here is my link for it https://kpsnikauw.blogspot.com/
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ReplyDeleteyour writing was cool, maybe next time talk more about personal expierences.
-Kyla
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Chur bailey its hirini.i like your bullying post and i hope your not one of these bullies in the school. your poem is really expiring but you can maybe put something about your experience during or when you have been bullied. nice poem and keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteChur Baylie its me Te Waipuke this is an excellent blog post that you have done about the truth of your bullying poem I read threw your paragraph and saw some interesting sent ins that you done well that's me bye. even if you want you can check my blog https://kpstewaipuket.blogspot.com/ so bye
ReplyDeleteSup bailey its kingi. I really Like your writing and how its around bullying and has lots of good language features. Maybe come check my work out https://kpskingih.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeletenice work bailey on your bullying post i hope you are not one of them.
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